Sienna you have definitely achieved your goal by using vocabulary that is interesting for the reader. I really liked the verbs you used to describe the actions you made while climbing the building (gripping, raced, grab tightly, stretches, tiptoed, glided...). What is your next learning goal in writing? Ms Anderson
Sienna you have definitely achieved your goal by using vocabulary that is interesting for the reader. I really liked the verbs you used to describe the actions you made while climbing the building (gripping, raced, grab tightly, stretches, tiptoed, glided...). What is your next learning goal in writing?
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